03-21-2012, 02:12 PM
don't go 'oh.. I'm sorry... It's my first attempt' because that will not work at all.
I just gave my point of view in the sprites you posted. This is a critique board, basically, and if you posted your work here, it automatically means 'I worked on this, I am looking for criticism and I'll understand if people don't praise it'.
This being a first attempt also doesn't magically turn your pixelart into a great work of art either; I am glad that you tried a custom work instead of editing others' stuff, but now that you have the means of making it better and know what's wrong, take your time and fix them, push your work to its limits.
I just gave my point of view in the sprites you posted. This is a critique board, basically, and if you posted your work here, it automatically means 'I worked on this, I am looking for criticism and I'll understand if people don't praise it'.
This being a first attempt also doesn't magically turn your pixelart into a great work of art either; I am glad that you tried a custom work instead of editing others' stuff, but now that you have the means of making it better and know what's wrong, take your time and fix them, push your work to its limits.
![[Image: deT1vCJ.png]](http://i.imgur.com/deT1vCJ.png)