04-12-2012, 06:54 AM
MRSKELETON is spot-on, that's what I was implying in my previous question.
Here's an edit, hopefully reducing all this empty space:
You should work more on perspective, it can give a strong impression, through the position of the view and the angle.
I think the characters should interact more, too.
Keep going!
Here's an edit, hopefully reducing all this empty space:
You should work more on perspective, it can give a strong impression, through the position of the view and the angle.
I think the characters should interact more, too.
Keep going!