11-01-2008, 06:40 PM
(This post was last modified: 11-01-2008, 07:03 PM by AutumnSpire.)
Hoo boy, this needs some serious work.
I'll list, since paragraphs are long and confusing:
- Anatomy needs work, a lot of work. Namely, hands, feet, torso, etc.
- Overall lineart is choppy, and square.
- Lightsource is incorrect, and shading is contradicting.
- Colors need contrast.
- Sword/Shield's outline is black, while Link's outline is colored.
- Sword/Shied's colors are MS Paint defaults. NEVER use Paint's default colors.
- White is R:255, B:255, G:255. Don't use that, either.
- I haven't checked, but the animation doesn't seem like it'll be smooth, and for some reason, the sword bends.
- Face is pillow-shaded.
I think I didn't miss anything...You might want to check those terms out if you're not familiar with them. You might want to tackle something more simple.
I'll list, since paragraphs are long and confusing:
- Anatomy needs work, a lot of work. Namely, hands, feet, torso, etc.
- Overall lineart is choppy, and square.
- Lightsource is incorrect, and shading is contradicting.
- Colors need contrast.
- Sword/Shield's outline is black, while Link's outline is colored.
- Sword/Shied's colors are MS Paint defaults. NEVER use Paint's default colors.
- White is R:255, B:255, G:255. Don't use that, either.
- I haven't checked, but the animation doesn't seem like it'll be smooth, and for some reason, the sword bends.
- Face is pillow-shaded.
I think I didn't miss anything...You might want to check those terms out if you're not familiar with them. You might want to tackle something more simple.