Speedo Joe

[Hoeloe]

Yes, that looks a lot better. It occurs to me now, though, that it looks more like his face is drifting over his body, rather than his body rotating. This is because there is no movement apart from the face. Clearly, the guy's body is not totally symmetrical in all axes above his waist, so his body should change shape slightly as it is seen from different angles.

Also you still need to fix the jump.