05-15-2012, 07:07 AM
Thanks Alex and Lexou. I know there are some minor typos and such, it was written on my iPhone at 12 am.
I know the syllable count does constantly change, but I thought it flowed nicely as well. Since its 1/1, if someone else says something about it I'll look into it.
I tried to have it flow as best as I could, as close to Dr Suess as I could get it. However I lack the technical prowess to write in an anapestic tetra meter, so I constantly repeated it and tried to go by ear.
And Lexou, this confrontation happened a good time ago, and I honestly don't won't to reopen such wounds. I'll wait untill I'm out of college, where I'm out of the house and financially independent
I know the syllable count does constantly change, but I thought it flowed nicely as well. Since its 1/1, if someone else says something about it I'll look into it.
I tried to have it flow as best as I could, as close to Dr Suess as I could get it. However I lack the technical prowess to write in an anapestic tetra meter, so I constantly repeated it and tried to go by ear.
And Lexou, this confrontation happened a good time ago, and I honestly don't won't to reopen such wounds. I'll wait untill I'm out of college, where I'm out of the house and financially independent