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Writing from a pro writer
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one thing that bugs me is that you started it with a response, which shouldn't really happen in letters. it should ease in instead of accusing the receiver of not understanding, as no letter has been aforementioned. removing "you don't understand" would be a good idea, as the king shouldn't really know whether his son would or not.
other than that its interesting but long for a letter Tongue
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Writing from a pro writer - by 727 - 05-20-2012, 10:50 AM
RE: Writing from a pro writer - by ~Axis~ - 05-20-2012, 11:07 AM
RE: Writing from a pro writer - by 727 - 05-20-2012, 11:09 AM
RE: Writing from a pro writer - by ~Axis~ - 05-20-2012, 11:16 AM
RE: Writing from a pro writer - by Previous - 05-20-2012, 11:41 AM
RE: Writing from a pro writer - by 727 - 05-20-2012, 11:45 AM
RE: Writing from a pro writer - by alexmach1 - 05-20-2012, 11:46 AM
RE: Writing from a pro writer - by 727 - 05-20-2012, 01:02 PM
RE: Writing from a pro writer - by Zadaben - 05-21-2012, 08:37 PM
RE: Writing from a pro writer - by ~Axis~ - 05-22-2012, 12:29 AM

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