05-27-2012, 09:02 AM
I think that you should tackle another styles for buildings. Right now, it looks like the same buildings over and over: red bricks with white corners. Play with the shape, colors, make roofs and stuff.
Also the left one looks iffy because it doesn't look like the platform is sticking out from the building. Shade it in a way that the projection is more apparent. Also, the second one being a shop, make it more appealing. People are supposed to be attracted by shops, so be creative with the text and colors. Make shelves with colorful stuff, display and stuff.
Also the left one looks iffy because it doesn't look like the platform is sticking out from the building. Shade it in a way that the projection is more apparent. Also, the second one being a shop, make it more appealing. People are supposed to be attracted by shops, so be creative with the text and colors. Make shelves with colorful stuff, display and stuff.