Most of the jaggies are gone, but you REALLY missed the point of the outline thing. Here, let me do an edit:
Notice how I don't have a line between the plates on the neck, but that each is still clearly visible.
This isn't a perfect example, but it gets across the idea.
Notice how I don't have a line between the plates on the neck, but that each is still clearly visible.
This isn't a perfect example, but it gets across the idea.