06-18-2012, 07:27 AM
(This post was last modified: 06-18-2012, 07:28 AM by Lexou Duck.)
The one i really have problems with is the 3rd one actually
![[Image: 6xH54.png]](http://i.imgur.com/6xH54.png)
1. the selout here is pretty strange, why have black on the borders of the outline ? it doesn't look very good
2. Since it's supposed to be a spherical shape, and the light source is in the top-left corner, you should make the shading fatter here, to make it really seem like a sphere, cause it's pretty flat atm.
3. that dark blue shade on the lance really doesn't work, change it to something way less saturated.
Also, you should either make the character darker, or the specular highlights brighter, cause you really can't notice them right now
1. the selout here is pretty strange, why have black on the borders of the outline ? it doesn't look very good
2. Since it's supposed to be a spherical shape, and the light source is in the top-left corner, you should make the shading fatter here, to make it really seem like a sphere, cause it's pretty flat atm.
3. that dark blue shade on the lance really doesn't work, change it to something way less saturated.
Also, you should either make the character darker, or the specular highlights brighter, cause you really can't notice them right now
![[Image: E3DU8rS.png]](http://i.imgur.com/E3DU8rS.png)