06-19-2012, 03:05 PM
You've got a bunch of really straight lines, like the side of the face, the top of the head and the shoulder line. Then, yous shading isn't quite right, you've got some banding and pillow shading. Avoid following your outline with your shade color. I think the far arm and leg should be shaded more to fit in with the style.
Check some of the other sprites here, shading is only used in special places.
Check some of the other sprites here, shading is only used in special places.