R.O.B. (KD3 edit) and Bowser Jr (SMW edit, not being submitted)

[Tapika]

Well, let's see now...

Not much to say about Bowser Jr, just a simple edit. As for R.O.B., here's some pointers:
-It might just be me, but his head seems to expand when facing 45 degrees.
-Please, do not use MS Paint default colors. If you are using the KD3 style, pick colors from that game's palette, if you don't think you're able to make your own palette.
- Why are you using people in other styles as reference? it could be very inaccurate.
-It's pillow-shaded.

Pillow shading is a type of shading that goes from the darkest shade (outside) to the lightest (inside), and has its light source inside. Unless the characters are all lanterns, that's pretty impossible... (And even then..)

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-I understand that the design is supposed to be "simple", but that's not an excuse for being cheap. The arms should at least have shading, especially in a style such as KD3.

All in all, it needs much improvement, but it's a nice try.

-True.
-Does it? Strange...
-It wasn't designed in a particular style, just based off it.
-Sorry, it's just this comic has both styles co-existing in harmony, and I've been asked to make it for that comic.
-I know what Pillow shading is.
-Actually, I've been planning to add shading to the arms. Thanks for reminding me.

Thanks for the comment. I'll get right on the arms.