06-27-2012, 05:30 PM
Yeah, yeah, okay.
First off, his chest is really distorted. It looks like he has a tumour on his shoulder. Secondly his limbs are somewhat noodley, particularly his arms. Make sure they are straight until the elbow. Thirdly, when he crouches, his legs become thinner, to the point where they are barely as thick as sticks. Fourthly, he looks generally off balance, like he's leaning backwards, though fixing the torso issue will probably help with this.
First off, his chest is really distorted. It looks like he has a tumour on his shoulder. Secondly his limbs are somewhat noodley, particularly his arms. Make sure they are straight until the elbow. Thirdly, when he crouches, his legs become thinner, to the point where they are barely as thick as sticks. Fourthly, he looks generally off balance, like he's leaning backwards, though fixing the torso issue will probably help with this.
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