06-30-2012, 09:44 PM
you know
maybe i'm wrong
but i feel like neither of you are actually getting the style down
both of those (increasingly so in yours, previous) feel incredibly cramped and overshaded, where, this style from what i've seen is incredibly simple and has very little shading - if any.
![[Image: R9tZD.png]](http://i.imgur.com/R9tZD.png)
this is what i came up with after a few minutes
i'm sure i butchered your character, but this edit was more to give you a better idea of the style you should be going for. just remember to stop trying to cram so many details into your sprite, and you should be fine.
oh, and loosen everything up too. the pose, the shading, everything. your sprites are incredibly stiff right now, and this style is the exact opposite of that! everything i've seen from gors, meta, and baegal has been incredibly cartoony and exaggerated, use their work as an example if you need to (you need to).
maybe i'm wrong
but i feel like neither of you are actually getting the style down
both of those (increasingly so in yours, previous) feel incredibly cramped and overshaded, where, this style from what i've seen is incredibly simple and has very little shading - if any.
this is what i came up with after a few minutes
i'm sure i butchered your character, but this edit was more to give you a better idea of the style you should be going for. just remember to stop trying to cram so many details into your sprite, and you should be fine.
oh, and loosen everything up too. the pose, the shading, everything. your sprites are incredibly stiff right now, and this style is the exact opposite of that! everything i've seen from gors, meta, and baegal has been incredibly cartoony and exaggerated, use their work as an example if you need to (you need to).