07-05-2012, 06:54 AM
The fire-flowers sides are too straight. The large coin needs to have some kind of shine and the rotation looks odd, same with the starman, it's "inbetween" frames make it look like it's twisting as the 'legs' are just moving closer together rather than turning with the it.
The majority of your line-art is fine (minus the big star coin) and the shading looks good enough. Some may argue for more contrast but I think it's fine where it stands at the moment.
It would be nice if you made an example with your grass tiles to better see how they look, but at the moment they seem just grand.
The majority of your line-art is fine (minus the big star coin) and the shading looks good enough. Some may argue for more contrast but I think it's fine where it stands at the moment.
It would be nice if you made an example with your grass tiles to better see how they look, but at the moment they seem just grand.