11-09-2008, 10:37 PM
(This post was last modified: 11-09-2008, 10:42 PM by Omegakyogre.)
(10-29-2008, 08:54 AM)Zabi Wrote: I did Mallow.
I could need some critique though.
I also would like to know if there must be a 2 Pixel gap between the legs. When I do that with Mallow, he really looks wierd.
While he's walking towards and away from the screen, his feet look like they change shape. If you make his standing sprites' feet skinnier or his walking sprites' feet wider (only needed when he's walking towards or away, not sideways) it'd look more consistent. I'd also increase the contrast in the shading on his upper body (though that may or may not be consistent with the style).
(10-30-2008, 05:43 PM)YellowWollywog Wrote: I did Dedede walking.
Proud of the one on the right, but the one on the left.......
looks like he's dancin'
The problem is that his arms are moving in the opposite direction they should be relative to his feet. When you walk, when your right foot moves forward, your right arm moves backward in order to keep yourself balanced; it doesn't move forward with your foot. You've made it so that his right arm moves forward with his right foot; that's why it looks weird (the left sprite has the same problem, but the fact that he's holding his hammer masks it).