11-10-2008, 05:57 AM
<breathe deep>
1. Lines are jagged. AA does not help make it smooth at all. First, clean up lines, AA later.
2. Needs to be rounder. He's basically a ball with two arms and a tail. Work from that.
3. No shading at all on the body, but shading on the tongue. Why?
4. Overall, generally messy.
1. Lines are jagged. AA does not help make it smooth at all. First, clean up lines, AA later.
2. Needs to be rounder. He's basically a ball with two arms and a tail. Work from that.
3. No shading at all on the body, but shading on the tongue. Why?
4. Overall, generally messy.
![[Image: ZRdfkWQ.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/ZRdfkWQ.jpg)