07-13-2012, 01:29 PM
i suggest you to start over, as tonberry said. This pose is really stiff, and a new body will better than tweaking some of the limbs.
Limbs aren't made of half-circles either, and the breasts look really out of place. Not to say that the 'hands on back' pose is really amateur-looking, as this avoids you from doing the hands. (I'm not saying that you should never put hands behind you when drawing/spriting, I'm just saying that in this case, it doesn't work).
i'll try making an edit soon to exemplify.
Limbs aren't made of half-circles either, and the breasts look really out of place. Not to say that the 'hands on back' pose is really amateur-looking, as this avoids you from doing the hands. (I'm not saying that you should never put hands behind you when drawing/spriting, I'm just saying that in this case, it doesn't work).
i'll try making an edit soon to exemplify.