Help me guys......

[Baegal]

You're getting there, but you still have way too many colors. The brown in the top right corner is very unnecessary and barely shows up at true view.
Are the knees supposed to be bent? I can't tell.
The arms, while at a more consistent length, lack a shoulder.
your shading doesn't make much sense-even though the arm and leg are in back, they don't really need the shadow if they're in the light. If you want to keep the shadows, get rid of the shading on the other leg. It's starting to become very "bandy" (?)
Try making him hunched over. Whenever you pose like that, it's more comfortable to be hunched forward.
If you want your character to be more passive, try a pose like these:

Also, the "feel free to leave comments, etc." isn't really necessary. That's the purpose of this board :U