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Whisp
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It. Is. JPGed.
Zoom in, take a look. You see? Noise everywhere! Very Sad

I aggree on that you should make the outline darker than the inside...

The shape is still off. It should rather be an egg than a ball. Peak to the top.
The eyes should be a bit rounder.
The mouth is too straight. Make it more curvy.
His hand-arm-things should be connected to the body - they look as if they were seperate.
The eyebrows shouldn't be such straight lines, I'd say - make them a bit curvy, too. They may be a bit thicker, aswell.
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Whisp - by Louie - 11-12-2008, 09:53 PM
RE: Whisp - by killme - 11-12-2008, 10:09 PM
RE: Whisp - by Previous - 11-13-2008, 01:36 AM
RE: Whisp - by Louie - 11-13-2008, 04:12 AM
RE: Whisp - by Castle Crasher - 11-13-2008, 05:28 AM
RE: Whisp - by Louie - 11-13-2008, 05:55 AM
RE: Whisp - by AutumnSpire - 11-13-2008, 06:01 AM
RE: Whisp - by Louie - 11-13-2008, 06:08 AM
RE: Whisp - by Previous - 11-13-2008, 10:14 AM
RE: Whisp - by camds - 11-13-2008, 11:29 AM
RE: Whisp - by Cesar - 11-13-2008, 11:55 AM
RE: Whisp - by Koopaul - 11-13-2008, 12:07 PM
RE: Whisp - by Shroob2 - 11-13-2008, 08:31 PM
RE: Whisp - by Louie - 11-15-2008, 08:59 PM
RE: Whisp - by Clear - 11-15-2008, 09:03 PM
RE: Whisp - by Louie - 11-15-2008, 09:56 PM
RE: Whisp - by killme - 11-15-2008, 10:09 PM
RE: Whisp - by Louie - 11-16-2008, 12:14 PM
RE: Whisp - by AutumnSpire - 11-16-2008, 05:25 PM

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