08-19-2012, 02:52 PM
This is a pretty good start! The work on the chest is remarkable. 
May I suggest you work more on your pixel clusters? The arms could do with more definition, and so could the face. For now, as your highlights are almost completely surrounded with a buffering shade which gives an impression of roundness, especially on the face.
Here's an edit taking in count what I said:
![[Image: VfSWT.png]](http://i.imgur.com/VfSWT.png)
I hope this helps, keep going!

May I suggest you work more on your pixel clusters? The arms could do with more definition, and so could the face. For now, as your highlights are almost completely surrounded with a buffering shade which gives an impression of roundness, especially on the face.
Here's an edit taking in count what I said:
![[Image: VfSWT.png]](http://i.imgur.com/VfSWT.png)
I hope this helps, keep going!