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Haiku's Quest Revamped
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So I removed all of the unnecessary extra stuff, and left the part that is somewhat usable.
I suggest that you rewrite everything, without as much clunky robotic dialogue, and with actual detail, not just, "then Haiku was an awesome ninja and killed everyone, the end."
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Haiku's Quest Revamped - by Makermatic21 - 07-09-2012, 11:23 AM
RE: Haiku's Quest - by Previous - 07-09-2012, 11:59 AM
RE: Haiku's Quest - by alexmach1 - 07-09-2012, 12:01 PM
RE: Haiku's Quest - by Sevenstitch - 07-09-2012, 12:02 PM
RE: Haiku's Quest - by Devicho - 07-09-2012, 03:33 PM
RE: Haiku's Quest - by Makermatic21 - 07-21-2012, 01:54 PM
RE: Haiku's Quest - by alexmach1 - 07-21-2012, 02:16 PM
RE: Haiku's Quest - by Makermatic21 - 07-21-2012, 02:24 PM
RE: Haiku's Quest - by Previous - 07-21-2012, 04:27 PM
RE: Haiku's Quest - by Gors - 07-21-2012, 06:03 PM
RE: Haiku's Quest - by Makermatic21 - 08-07-2012, 08:58 PM
RE: Haiku's Quest - by Previous - 08-08-2012, 04:58 AM
RE: Haiku's Quest Revamped - by Makermatic21 - 09-06-2012, 04:04 PM
RE: Haiku's Quest Revamped - by Zadaben - 09-06-2012, 06:49 PM
RE: Haiku's Quest Revamped - by alexmach1 - 09-06-2012, 07:12 PM
RE: Haiku's Quest Revamped - by Hoeloe - 09-07-2012, 03:22 AM
RE: Haiku's Quest Revamped - by Makermatic21 - 10-22-2012, 10:12 AM
RE: Haiku's Quest Revamped - by Garamonde - 10-22-2012, 10:14 AM

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