09-06-2012, 06:49 PM
So I removed all of the unnecessary extra stuff, and left the part that is somewhat usable.
I suggest that you rewrite everything, without as much clunky robotic dialogue, and with actual detail, not just, "then Haiku was an awesome ninja and killed everyone, the end."
I suggest that you rewrite everything, without as much clunky robotic dialogue, and with actual detail, not just, "then Haiku was an awesome ninja and killed everyone, the end."