10-04-2012, 05:21 PM
A few things,
Did you look at what A Moon Cleft looks like?
Look at how its shaped, look at the colors, look at the size and the spikes
Make it look more like that design,
your designs shape is way too tall, and the spikes dont make any sense and the boots are barely visible.
Try focusing on a limited pallette { Limited Colors } make a different colour for the boot, and another one for the spikes...
Your shading and lightsource need some work since we cant understand where the light is coming from. It seems pillowshaded
Also dont you dont have to make a new thread for something like this, just post it in the other thread you made
Im dont usually give c+c, so im not sure if that was good critic or not, but eh hope this helps
Did you look at what A Moon Cleft looks like?
Look at how its shaped, look at the colors, look at the size and the spikes
Make it look more like that design,
your designs shape is way too tall, and the spikes dont make any sense and the boots are barely visible.
Try focusing on a limited pallette { Limited Colors } make a different colour for the boot, and another one for the spikes...
Your shading and lightsource need some work since we cant understand where the light is coming from. It seems pillowshaded
Also dont you dont have to make a new thread for something like this, just post it in the other thread you made
Im dont usually give c+c, so im not sure if that was good critic or not, but eh hope this helps