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Halloween Poem
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(11-18-2008, 04:08 PM)megazario Wrote: No actually Rags they didn't care the teacher is just a fagget.

fagot
but regardless
you suck

Why are you posting a 3rd grade poem and wanting criticisms? It says to post what we think of it.
What grade are you in?

Nothing more or less useless than imagining that there is more to be done. Recall: no matter what is new there will always be these hands and these sandwiches. The enlightenment came and went and sliced bread was our creation— the best to be had. There can be no avenues of intellectual discord. We will always fold our food and put it into our mouths, long after our bodies forget what to do with it.
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Messages In This Thread
Halloween Poem - by megazario - 11-11-2008, 09:33 PM
RE: Halloween Poem - by GrooveMan.exe - 11-12-2008, 01:59 AM
RE: Halloween Poem - by Oddball - 11-13-2008, 12:16 AM
RE: Halloween Poem - by mors ontologica - 11-14-2008, 11:39 AM
RE: Halloween Poem - by megazario - 11-17-2008, 05:47 PM
RE: Halloween Poem - by Kairos - 11-18-2008, 10:25 AM
RE: Halloween Poem - by GrooveMan.exe - 11-17-2008, 06:00 PM
RE: Halloween Poem - by Alpha Six - 11-17-2008, 11:04 PM
RE: Halloween Poem - by LeleleleMAXIMUM - 11-18-2008, 11:36 AM
RE: Halloween Poem - by mors ontologica - 11-17-2008, 06:33 PM
RE: Halloween Poem - by megazario - 11-18-2008, 04:08 PM
RE: Halloween Poem - by Oddball - 11-18-2008, 07:15 PM
RE: Halloween Poem - by mors ontologica - 11-18-2008, 05:15 PM
RE: Halloween Poem - by Maxpphire - 11-18-2008, 05:18 PM
RE: Halloween Poem - by amber dawn firebaugh - 11-18-2008, 09:51 PM
RE: Halloween Poem - by Alpha Six - 11-19-2008, 06:27 AM
RE: Halloween Poem - by LeleleleMAXIMUM - 11-19-2008, 10:31 AM

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