Torch's Sprites

[Baegal]

For starters, your lineart is fairly wonky. I'm not sure what you're going for with the character, but the actual lines need some reworking. The arms and shoulder parts, for example. With the way you have it, your character appears to have no neck, thus making it look like his shoulders are coming out of his chin. The lines are also unrefined.

You have 'A', when you should have 'B', generally speaking.
this image, courtesy of the Spriting Dictionary, also mentions clean lines.

I'm not sure entirely how to explain this, sorry. I hope this helps in some form!