10-10-2012, 07:12 PM
I'm not a fan of your shading, either. Your colours are very close together and only have a difference in luminosity, which is unappealing; try instead to contrast them far more sharply and note that as a general rule, highlighted things are yellower and shadowed things are bluer. The shading also follows the body in a manner very unlike clothing, rather more akin to wood - just look up some actual jeans, shirts, etc as examples.
Good luck!
Good luck!