11-19-2008, 11:12 AM
I'll criticize it as a sprite now then.
The Lineart is very lazy. I really think there should be more sizes of body parts. In addition, all you did was crop off part of the bigger body piece to make the smaller one. Now it looks stupid like that, especially since those rings remain the same size.
Needs more contrast.
The shading is incorrect. You shaded it as if the body and face were round--they're not. They're square. In addition, the light source is inconsistent around the head.
The "rings" on the body are blocky. And too thick...
I think the wings should be resprited to flap, not rotated.
Not much crits on the eyes, though the rings in the eyes bother me... and not just because of the lack of contrast.
Make the tail-hair-things bend and sway. Basically, more animation.
The lineart for the nose is very pixely. Make it more smooth.
Too lazy to point out more... As far as positive notes for it goes... Uh... the general lineart is kinda accurate, I guess. Nice job, maybe.
The Lineart is very lazy. I really think there should be more sizes of body parts. In addition, all you did was crop off part of the bigger body piece to make the smaller one. Now it looks stupid like that, especially since those rings remain the same size.
Needs more contrast.
The shading is incorrect. You shaded it as if the body and face were round--they're not. They're square. In addition, the light source is inconsistent around the head.
The "rings" on the body are blocky. And too thick...
I think the wings should be resprited to flap, not rotated.
Not much crits on the eyes, though the rings in the eyes bother me... and not just because of the lack of contrast.
Make the tail-hair-things bend and sway. Basically, more animation.
The lineart for the nose is very pixely. Make it more smooth.
Too lazy to point out more... As far as positive notes for it goes... Uh... the general lineart is kinda accurate, I guess. Nice job, maybe.