SupaBuddie's Sprites

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Aw guys I'm sorry!! I thought his name was mario but now I looked wiki and it actualy is sonic, mario is that nintendo man
But I did ask my brother before and he sayd mario was the name! That was mean!
I'm sorry, next time I will look wiki first! SupaPromise!!

Yes, that looks a lot like Mario

all jokes aside, is that the MS Paint Vista default pallet? I'd recommend making your own colors for your sprites. The lineart is a bit wonky in some places, the shines really aren't necessary, and the anatomy is a bit off. If someone could expand on this, please do. I'm not very good at explaining things.

I did make colors myself, I don't even have vista (is that the new one?), are they not good? Can you tell me how to make better colors?
Without the shines he looks somehow flat I thought. I'm not really good with anatomy, sorry!! Its so difficult! What exactly is wonky?

*sonic

it kind of looks really static, like sonic dosnt really stand like that, he always has a more dynamic pose. Not tooo dynamic, but you get what im saying. Also the legs should be taller, Legs are usually longer than half the body (yes starsock im jacking your C+C)
Also he is abnormally fat, you should change that
Hope this helps

No, sorry, I do not really understand or know how to make it more dynamic. Should I make him more like he is running?
Who is starsock?

I made a sprite of mario, my favourite video game hero!

Alright, enough fun for me.

Sonic's skin belly thing should be a bit higher. Move it some pixels.
Also, why did you make his shoes the same color of his skin if you had a white pallete?
His legs could be a bit longer and his left hand (our right) is shorter than his right hand.
Also, he is a bit stiff. Try making him more lively by exaggerating it a bit

EDIT: woah, I did not see the posts above. geez, you guys type fast!! XD

I thought they were yellow-ish, but that must have been a different character then? Maybe I should have looked at a picture! I see what you mean about the hand.

*sonic

it kind of looks really static, like sonic dosnt really stand like that, he always has a more dynamic pose. Not tooo dynamic, but you get what im saying. Also the legs should be taller, Legs are usually longer than half the body (yes starsock im jacking your C+C)
Also he is abnormally fat, you should change that
Hope this helps

Actually the design looks more like Classic Sonic and it looks like he's trying to imitate the iconic Classic Sonic pose. He's kinda fat as Classic Sonic, too.

Yes, the modern sonic looks really weird, like if he took growth hormons! Makes him look nothing like hedgehog!

Thank you for your comments, they are really helpful!

I made some changes, but I am not sure.



Made legs a bit longer, changed arms (gave him a thumb up to make it more dynamic??), made the belly a pixel up, removed a few light spots and tried to make other colours but I am not certain if they are better.