11-04-2012, 05:31 AM
The shading looks wonky / jaggy to me.
As for the cake, the purple shade blends in with the brown, making it look really blurry. You should use more inlines to prevent that. Also, I'd refrain from using selective outlining, it works only in special cases.
Generally, it's better not to work on a white canvas, especially when you are using white in your sprites.
![[Image: o6w6B.png]](http://i.imgur.com/o6w6B.png)
I'm not too certain with my edit, but it illustrates a few things?
As for the cake, the purple shade blends in with the brown, making it look really blurry. You should use more inlines to prevent that. Also, I'd refrain from using selective outlining, it works only in special cases.
Generally, it's better not to work on a white canvas, especially when you are using white in your sprites.
I'm not too certain with my edit, but it illustrates a few things?