11-13-2012, 07:48 PM
(11-11-2012, 03:06 PM)Plokman Wrote:but ut seems the soild its really warm and comfy because you refuse to go beyond crawling with this.(11-11-2012, 11:57 AM)SKELTON S. SKELETON Wrote: I get what you're going for, but it's literally a bunch of boxes with pretty minimal shading. If that's what you're going for, great, you're the number one box champ
All I'm asking is for a bit of constructive criticism. Not Sarcasm. I Only asked if it looked nice for the style I ain't asking for a crown. I'm just trying to improve. I know its simple but you got to crawl before you walk and you got to walk before ya run.
you're missing a lot of details(rivets anyone?), proportions are quite skewed(the train seems to be shorter thn it is suposed to see). also you're using a terrible photo as areference. there is no way you can actually tell the scale of the train with a photo at that angle. get a sideview and a front/top image and then compare it with your sprite.
the whole mother 3 fiasco seems more of an excuse to not shade things properly other than anything else.