11-20-2012, 12:06 PM
I don't know what I'm looking at on the other two. Maybe it's a readability/anatomy issue.
The pose on Bundam is really weird, and his coloring makes his leg look really weird. As some fashion stylists say, black on the clothes' extremities 'remove' it, which makes his crotch placed way high on his body. The blue outline around the black fur further gives this illusion.
He also seems to be leaning back a tad. Since he has huge ear things weighing him back, his neutral pose should be more sloped forward in order to be balanced properly. Also, his ear fuses with his body and is probably out of perspective, but I can't point where exactly.
HRAIR-00 is definitely out of perspective, compare his body's perspective with the ear's position. His right ear should be positioned BEHIND his body, and with its palm showing (considering the left ear, that is). His ears also seem more straight than curvy (some of the shading too) so I'd do something about it.
The pose on Bundam is really weird, and his coloring makes his leg look really weird. As some fashion stylists say, black on the clothes' extremities 'remove' it, which makes his crotch placed way high on his body. The blue outline around the black fur further gives this illusion.
He also seems to be leaning back a tad. Since he has huge ear things weighing him back, his neutral pose should be more sloped forward in order to be balanced properly. Also, his ear fuses with his body and is probably out of perspective, but I can't point where exactly.
HRAIR-00 is definitely out of perspective, compare his body's perspective with the ear's position. His right ear should be positioned BEHIND his body, and with its palm showing (considering the left ear, that is). His ears also seem more straight than curvy (some of the shading too) so I'd do something about it.
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