12-02-2012, 05:42 PM
As someone who likes to pretend they know what they're doing, I've got a little advice.
![[Image: ac8pw6.jpg]](http://oi46.tinypic.com/ac8pw6.jpg)
That whole stretchy business is done kinda poorly
The fact that you added bounce like that shows you know what you're doing, but the way you did it only really works well in programs like Flash.
I'd suggest going in a fixing up all the lines that are blurred and broken because of it.
Another thing:
![[Image: manacanonv2.gif]](http://s14.postimage.org/nxn6rl2jh/manacanonv2.gif)
In animations like this, where the motions are realy exaggerated, you need a lot more frames of follow-through
![[Image: jephidle.gif]](http://s14.postimage.org/kcrb8cxzx/jephidle.gif)
Here, his arms should drag down a little more, maybe down 1 pixel for 1 frame, because how it is now its like they just hit something.
But seriously though, other than that, I've got nothing but good things to say. The Art style is great and I want to see any more characters if you have any.
Also, Jeph with a Ph? Never seen it spelled that way. Neat.
That whole stretchy business is done kinda poorly
The fact that you added bounce like that shows you know what you're doing, but the way you did it only really works well in programs like Flash.
I'd suggest going in a fixing up all the lines that are blurred and broken because of it.
Another thing:
In animations like this, where the motions are realy exaggerated, you need a lot more frames of follow-through
Here, his arms should drag down a little more, maybe down 1 pixel for 1 frame, because how it is now its like they just hit something.
But seriously though, other than that, I've got nothing but good things to say. The Art style is great and I want to see any more characters if you have any.
Also, Jeph with a Ph? Never seen it spelled that way. Neat.