12-14-2012, 11:43 PM
Much nicer than other renditions! Clean lines, good colors for the most part, and the animation is decent.
The animation you added to the clothes is an improvement as well, though still a bit strange. A very good reference for this would be Dark Fawful, or any character with hanging/drooping parts.
Though - and I hate to harp on this again - this really upbeat, bouncy sort of idle just does not fit with Geno's character at all. I'm not sure what kind of character you're trying to portray him as, but he's not Pinocchio by any means... Geno is rather serious. Realistically, if he moved at all at idle stance, it'd be much more focused and less uppity. Aside from that... I'm just really confused what he's even doing.
The animation you added to the clothes is an improvement as well, though still a bit strange. A very good reference for this would be Dark Fawful, or any character with hanging/drooping parts.
Though - and I hate to harp on this again - this really upbeat, bouncy sort of idle just does not fit with Geno's character at all. I'm not sure what kind of character you're trying to portray him as, but he's not Pinocchio by any means... Geno is rather serious. Realistically, if he moved at all at idle stance, it'd be much more focused and less uppity. Aside from that... I'm just really confused what he's even doing.