12-23-2012, 07:59 AM
the standing pose you've got looks unnaturally tilted, flip it over to see balance issues
also the way you drew her legs lack hips, you may wnt to add slight curves on it. the hair color you chose for her looks better though.
I think the hand pose is better in the rough sketch than in any of the colored ones, it makes more sense imo. overall, I like your edit, but there are some aspects of virtualboy's that I like better.
also the way you drew her legs lack hips, you may wnt to add slight curves on it. the hair color you chose for her looks better though.
I think the hand pose is better in the rough sketch than in any of the colored ones, it makes more sense imo. overall, I like your edit, but there are some aspects of virtualboy's that I like better.
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