01-05-2013, 11:41 AM
keep your background colour what you'd expect to be the background when the sprites are in use, a good fall back colour is anything pale.
I can see some nasty jaggies and readability issues, and as previously mentioned noisy pixel placement.
your colour choices don't work well together and tones within a single colour are lacking contrast and have saturation consistency issues.
I'd say your first and foremost issue is that of shape and jaggies. if you start from there and work your way up (showing us how the sprite progresses) we may be able to pin which mistakes are made earliest / most significantly.
I can see some nasty jaggies and readability issues, and as previously mentioned noisy pixel placement.
your colour choices don't work well together and tones within a single colour are lacking contrast and have saturation consistency issues.
I'd say your first and foremost issue is that of shape and jaggies. if you start from there and work your way up (showing us how the sprite progresses) we may be able to pin which mistakes are made earliest / most significantly.