01-06-2013, 09:13 AM
I've removed my posts now that there is something in the first post (to avoid irrelevant padding)
to comment on the sprite, the blink line is bigger than the eye, the colours need a bit more contrast and the eye itself doesn't read very well.
the selout is unnecessary and its hard to tell if the pokemon is meant to be a caterpillar or a tiny onyx.
The design from what can be seen is also fairly boring and the overlapping of lines per segment makes it look like an early sketch (in which case its unwise to animate so early on)
to comment on the sprite, the blink line is bigger than the eye, the colours need a bit more contrast and the eye itself doesn't read very well.
the selout is unnecessary and its hard to tell if the pokemon is meant to be a caterpillar or a tiny onyx.
The design from what can be seen is also fairly boring and the overlapping of lines per segment makes it look like an early sketch (in which case its unwise to animate so early on)