01-10-2013, 07:59 PM
colours still eye burning and your proportions are still off.
you dont need to abandon a style for good proportions, but you do need to keep things to a certain ratio, keep the general size and shape balanced and believable.
that said your fists are huge, arms stubby legs... odd, body short, head short.
the colours, the blue is over-saturated to heck, I'd advise avoiding pure blue colours, shift it a bit into the green, for a general blue I'd say between 200 and 220 hue (assuming 0 - 360 hue format) its a strong blue colour with less of the eye burn. that or as stated lower the saturation, with such a strong blue saturation should be at 70 or less (assuming 0 - 100 saturation format)
you dont need to abandon a style for good proportions, but you do need to keep things to a certain ratio, keep the general size and shape balanced and believable.
that said your fists are huge, arms stubby legs... odd, body short, head short.
the colours, the blue is over-saturated to heck, I'd advise avoiding pure blue colours, shift it a bit into the green, for a general blue I'd say between 200 and 220 hue (assuming 0 - 360 hue format) its a strong blue colour with less of the eye burn. that or as stated lower the saturation, with such a strong blue saturation should be at 70 or less (assuming 0 - 100 saturation format)