01-29-2013, 10:24 AM
Whenenever I look at these...I don't see Wario and Waluigi. You need to work on structuring them more.
Wario:
-Needs to be wider and needs to be more rounded out on the sides to emphasize on his fat belly
-The eyes! The biggest things for Wario sprites is the eyes! You gotta make them a certain way; Wario has a unique shape to them that is hard to explain
-thicker eyebrows
-Hat needs to "poof" out from the sides as shown in this ref(you can use the Wario Landhake it artwork for refs as well)
-Arms need more muscularity
-Moustache needs to be redefined and consist of AA
-Face should have more structure to it. Wario is quite a handsome man.
-Yellow should be more golden yellow, the color right now is too dull
-Overalls should be a different hue of purple
I would crit Waluigi, but I just realized I need to head off to campus dgdmdff
Wario:
-Needs to be wider and needs to be more rounded out on the sides to emphasize on his fat belly
-The eyes! The biggest things for Wario sprites is the eyes! You gotta make them a certain way; Wario has a unique shape to them that is hard to explain
-thicker eyebrows
-Hat needs to "poof" out from the sides as shown in this ref(you can use the Wario Landhake it artwork for refs as well)
-Arms need more muscularity
-Moustache needs to be redefined and consist of AA
-Face should have more structure to it. Wario is quite a handsome man.
-Yellow should be more golden yellow, the color right now is too dull
-Overalls should be a different hue of purple
I would crit Waluigi, but I just realized I need to head off to campus dgdmdff