Concept sprite, looking for opinions.

[Bearded_Beast]

The middle one's waist is all off, too, as if a chunk was missing.

The chunk missing is intentional. It's as if his middle-torso/abs/spine is a pillar. Here's the boss the form comes from. I call him "Mason Stone"

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Though, I really do like the palette changes. After seeing how the head's position is, I will have to alter the head and collar accordingly. It's supposed to cover his mouth and be broad in front like Potemkin's.

Thank you for taking time to illustrate these facts.

Bombshell... you made my day with that bit. It only gets funnier the longer you watch the sprite while listening to "Another One Bites the Dust"