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Novally's Sprite Thread (C+C needed!)*
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(02-03-2013, 01:29 PM)Virtuaboy123 Wrote: Your (ref?) character's face could be bigger I think. The hoodie in the back don't need to jut out that much.

The wizard looks fine however. Its hard to give C+C when the sprites are small and don't have many details.

I didn't notice how much the hoodie poked out. That's from me moving up the head around to much but I will fix this.

As for the wizard, thanks and yeah I know it lacks details. It's a 30 x 30 sprite (not really it's way smaller than that but that's how much the til should be).

(02-03-2013, 03:48 PM)StarSock64 Wrote: The curves in the calves are a little too dramatic, especially on the farther leg. I think it has a lot to do with the way the feet are connecting to the ankles; they need to be pushed back a bit. Also, the torso is just kind of two straight lines right now. Try to figure out how to add some shape. Moving the eyes/face up a bit would probably be better, too.

I will do my best to rude them. I don't understand the torso comment. Right now I'm going to shape up his torso a bit though. I will also move up his eyes. Thank you.
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~Novs
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RE: Critique these items please - by ~Axis~ - 01-29-2013, 01:57 AM
RE: Critique these items please - by Novally - 01-29-2013, 02:07 AM
RE: Critique these items please - by Previous - 01-29-2013, 04:16 AM
RE: Critique these items please - by Novally - 01-29-2013, 04:19 AM
RE: Critique these items please - by Previous - 01-29-2013, 04:37 AM
RE: Critique these items please - by Novally - 01-29-2013, 04:46 AM
RE: Critique these items please - by Previous - 01-29-2013, 04:54 AM
RE: Critique these items please - by Novally - 01-29-2013, 05:02 AM
RE: Critique these items please - by ~Axis~ - 01-29-2013, 05:16 AM
RE: Critique these items please - by Novally - 01-29-2013, 05:38 AM
RE: Critique these items please - by Sevenstitch - 01-29-2013, 08:56 AM
RE: Critique these items please - by Mr. Jam - 01-29-2013, 10:22 AM
RE: Critique these items please - by Novally - 01-29-2013, 03:22 PM
RE: Critique these items please - by RnR - 01-29-2013, 03:24 PM
RE: Critique these items please - by Novally - 01-29-2013, 03:31 PM
RE: Critique these items please - by Mr. Jam - 01-29-2013, 04:17 PM
RE: Critique these items please - by Novally - 01-30-2013, 01:30 AM
RE: Critique these items please - by Hoeloe - 01-30-2013, 03:37 AM
RE: Critique these items please - by Novally - 01-30-2013, 03:39 AM
RE: Critique these items please - by ~Axis~ - 01-30-2013, 04:44 AM
RE: Critique these items please - by Novally - 01-30-2013, 01:44 PM
RE: Critique these items please - by Novally - 01-31-2013, 03:17 AM
RE: Critique these items please - by Shade - 01-31-2013, 11:20 AM
RE: Critique these items please - by Gors - 01-31-2013, 12:44 PM
RE: Critique these items please - by Vipershark - 01-31-2013, 02:29 PM
RE: Critique these items please - by Novally - 01-31-2013, 03:10 PM
RE: Critique these items please - by Vipershark - 01-31-2013, 06:40 PM
RE: Critique these items please - by Novally - 01-31-2013, 09:34 PM
RE: Novally's Sprite Thread (C+C needed!)* - by Novally - 02-03-2013, 04:15 PM

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