02-04-2013, 06:38 PM
The outlines surrounding the lower torso are literally parallel; this is unnatural because even the male torso has a slight inward curvature, which would be even more noticeable at that angle. I'd suggest drawing the back inward a little.
Also, it's kind of weird how the shirt transitions into the exposed abdominal area.
If its tight on him, then it'd be something like this: http://www.buyfootballstuff.com/images/S...Wear-2.gif
If it's a little loose, maybe more like this: http://www.rufskin.com/blog/wp-content/u.../mesh5.jpg
In any case, that line is too concave and if it's tight on his skin, it shouldn't cast a shadow like that on it.
His eyes also bring in too much attention, they might be covering too much of his face area.
The pose and expression also look kinda bland; they show neither preparedness nor confidence.
Also, it's kind of weird how the shirt transitions into the exposed abdominal area.
If its tight on him, then it'd be something like this: http://www.buyfootballstuff.com/images/S...Wear-2.gif
If it's a little loose, maybe more like this: http://www.rufskin.com/blog/wp-content/u.../mesh5.jpg
In any case, that line is too concave and if it's tight on his skin, it shouldn't cast a shadow like that on it.
His eyes also bring in too much attention, they might be covering too much of his face area.
The pose and expression also look kinda bland; they show neither preparedness nor confidence.