02-05-2013, 06:51 PM
the clouds look like spattered blobs and the mist and light... ugh *shudders* transparency.
the character also has a lot of jaggies, proportion issues and animation issues.
I think you should start fixing up the character before continuing with the environment hes in,
I like the style your going for but the mistakes in colour, line art, shading are quite severe in a general sense
the colours have little harmony and varying contrasts, the hair is too dark, the skinis too grey, the jacket has contrast issues.
the lines are hitting double thicks in areas and not in others and the form is clunky and messy.
the character also has a lot of jaggies, proportion issues and animation issues.
I think you should start fixing up the character before continuing with the environment hes in,
I like the style your going for but the mistakes in colour, line art, shading are quite severe in a general sense
the colours have little harmony and varying contrasts, the hair is too dark, the skinis too grey, the jacket has contrast issues.
the lines are hitting double thicks in areas and not in others and the form is clunky and messy.