02-13-2013, 12:34 PM
the way hes leaning he will fall over, spread the legs, if their close together he'll just tip.
you should take into account the red handicap, it doesn't shade too well so you'll need to darken the darker and lighten the lighter for it to appear to follow the same lighting ramp as your other colours.
the lack of line art isn't helping its readability, line art is needed before you use selout.
considering the size of the sprite you should only have 2 / 3 shades per colour, 4 is a bit overkill, if your adamant on 4 it'd probably be wiser to use a universal darkest colour for it.
in terms of anatomy his legs are too long in comparison to his body, either make the legs shorter or body taller. (but not both, its in such a position that changing both would tip the scales)
with regards to the style the hands would probably look better if they were a little bigger too.
you should take into account the red handicap, it doesn't shade too well so you'll need to darken the darker and lighten the lighter for it to appear to follow the same lighting ramp as your other colours.
the lack of line art isn't helping its readability, line art is needed before you use selout.
considering the size of the sprite you should only have 2 / 3 shades per colour, 4 is a bit overkill, if your adamant on 4 it'd probably be wiser to use a universal darkest colour for it.
in terms of anatomy his legs are too long in comparison to his body, either make the legs shorter or body taller. (but not both, its in such a position that changing both would tip the scales)
with regards to the style the hands would probably look better if they were a little bigger too.