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Archie Comics Sonic Game (WIP)
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(02-23-2013, 09:56 PM)Bombshell93 Wrote: use img tags
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and core problems I'd say your contrast is too low, the fists are oddly shaped and the pose is too stiff, his legs should be spread a little especially with that angle.
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Ah, wasn't sure if img tags worked here, haha. Though that would be stupid if they didn't.

Anyway! Thanks for the criticisms - I couldn't get his fists how I wanted them - it's tough to accentuate his actual Knuckles, and his gloves always looked really puffy to me - I also didn't want to make them too big. I'll have to fiddle with it a little more.

His pose does look a little stiff - I would probably only really have a one-pixel difference between his legs since his torso is kinda jelly-bean shaped, and it narrows in a little more towards the bottom. Would the 1-pixel space look odd between his legs?
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Archie Comics Sonic Game (WIP) - by damnablebear - 02-23-2013, 07:49 PM
RE: Archie Comics Sonic Game (WIP) - by Garamonde - 02-23-2013, 08:19 PM
RE: Archie Comics Sonic Game (WIP) - by Garamonde - 02-23-2013, 08:26 PM
RE: Archie Comics Sonic Game (WIP) - by damnablebear - 02-23-2013, 10:04 PM
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RE: Archie Comics Sonic Game (WIP) - by Garamonde - 02-27-2013, 06:44 PM
RE: Archie Comics Sonic Game (WIP) - by Garamonde - 02-27-2013, 07:10 PM

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