02-27-2013, 04:43 AM
Just a few points quickly illustrated:
![[Image: 71lVVfT.png]](http://i.imgur.com/71lVVfT.png)
Some of the shades could use more contrast, namely the red highlight and the skin tones plus the eye shading. His head appears quite squished and his chest points in a differend direction than the head. Also, the head and chest shading don't really convey volume, but are just there - with banding at the back of the head, too. The far hair strand things look like they bend the wrong they compared to the close ones.
Some of the shades could use more contrast, namely the red highlight and the skin tones plus the eye shading. His head appears quite squished and his chest points in a differend direction than the head. Also, the head and chest shading don't really convey volume, but are just there - with banding at the back of the head, too. The far hair strand things look like they bend the wrong they compared to the close ones.