12-12-2008, 12:46 PM
I like it overall. It just needs bit of work in some areas.
Mario's hands seem a bit big. His pose during the forward smash when he has his hand out in front of him looks awkward. I'd try to make it 'flow' more; make it look more natural.
Kirby looks like he's twitching as he runs. If you're going to make his head rotate as he runs, make sure it's smooth throughout the entire animation.
Some of Yoshi's lines jagged and square (especially on his nose), and his hand looks pillow shaded.
I'm not a fan of that Meta Knight. His mask should be circular and cover more of his body, his sword looks awkward because it's perfectly horizontal in some parts and not others (though he's holding it slanted), and his feet are way too thin and make it look like he's standing on his toes.
I think you should be more consistent on whether to use black inside the characters or strictly for outlines. You use a lot of black inside Mario, but you don't also use black to outline Pikachu's lower ear, so you have to look hard to actually see it.
I really like the SSBM Link, though.
Mario's hands seem a bit big. His pose during the forward smash when he has his hand out in front of him looks awkward. I'd try to make it 'flow' more; make it look more natural.
Kirby looks like he's twitching as he runs. If you're going to make his head rotate as he runs, make sure it's smooth throughout the entire animation.
Some of Yoshi's lines jagged and square (especially on his nose), and his hand looks pillow shaded.
I'm not a fan of that Meta Knight. His mask should be circular and cover more of his body, his sword looks awkward because it's perfectly horizontal in some parts and not others (though he's holding it slanted), and his feet are way too thin and make it look like he's standing on his toes.
I think you should be more consistent on whether to use black inside the characters or strictly for outlines. You use a lot of black inside Mario, but you don't also use black to outline Pikachu's lower ear, so you have to look hard to actually see it.
I really like the SSBM Link, though.