03-05-2013, 06:49 PM
Proportion-wise: maybe you have the right number of heads in total, but it may be a bit skewed when it comes to the proportion of the torso compared to the overall height and/or legs, or even the width of her hips or shoulders...
Regarding the style, I think it's interesting to see the kind of sketches Miu does in comparison:
![[Image: Jamscribbles.jpg]](http://www.luvpeaches.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/11/Jamscribbles.jpg)
CookingPeach/Miu likes "sexy". Don't hesitate in making the breasts bigger, but more importantly look for references to get this anime/sexy/cute idea to shine through. What makes his art good is the way he can make one of his characters seem very innocent and naive whilst giving a sexual and voyeuristic dimension to them. In that sense, you have to think carefully about what you make us want to see: is it cleavage? A behind, perhaps? What is the character candidly doing which could emphasise on these?
Regarding the style, I think it's interesting to see the kind of sketches Miu does in comparison:
CookingPeach/Miu likes "sexy". Don't hesitate in making the breasts bigger, but more importantly look for references to get this anime/sexy/cute idea to shine through. What makes his art good is the way he can make one of his characters seem very innocent and naive whilst giving a sexual and voyeuristic dimension to them. In that sense, you have to think carefully about what you make us want to see: is it cleavage? A behind, perhaps? What is the character candidly doing which could emphasise on these?
![[Image: x1aIZ2e.gif]](http://i.imgur.com/x1aIZ2e.gif)
![[Image: shrine.gif]](https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/344477/shrine.gif)