Trying this again on a whim.

[Gors]

even still, you should always make his body in its entirety before trying to clean stuff. Not only to fix proportions, but also to draw a convincing pose. next time add his legs.

tip: his arms are arched in your sprire, and it looks weird. If you take human anatomy into account, youll see that limbs are made up of two fixed equally sized "sticks" (arm-forearm, thigh-calf) joined by a joint (elbow, knee). Even if you can do several poses with legs and arms, theyll always be limited to those sticks´ size. keep that in mind.