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[Ultimecia]

Being a member for five minutes isn't much a excuse. Usually I spend my first five minutes reading the rules.
And it's good to have constructive criticism, so you can improve.

If you ask me, it's a recolor of Chao with a real bad shading. Not that hard to fix, just increase the contrast. The rules says no fan-characters can be submitted, but you can post it here to have help to improve it. Then, your next edit can be better. And the following even better, and so on.
If you don't like criticism, don't talk to people. Everyone is a critic.