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Been spriting for a while, want some professional critique.
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To be honest, this is just a doodle rather than a sprite. If you plan to neaten it later with color and shading, be sure to save a copy of the cleaned outlines so if you mess up, you have a backup.

This being said, you don't have good animation skills as pointed out by starsock, and to add to her post, you need to give the attacks some kind of startup and delay to make them convincing. When you throw a punch, you don't stick your arm forward like a robot, you bring it back to charge, then accelerate it quickly. It is not an uniform movement.

I would like to see your still sprite work though, to see how well you are in shading and colors (which should be good enough before attempting animation).
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RE: Been spriting for a while, want some professional critique. - by Gors - 04-01-2013, 06:21 AM

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