04-04-2013, 07:19 AM
Have some quick thoughs of mine as a suggestion of some things.
![[Image: p1Nut4n.png]](http://i.imgur.com/p1Nut4n.png)
Original - colour adjust - some changes to some pixel clusters.
I'd increase the contrast. Maybe do a little more hue-shifting, too (dark red over to purple and such fancy things). I also reduced the colour count in my edit.
Concerning the tongue, I think it's mostly the shape that looks off and having the highlight rather centered seems odd to me, too - mine is more oriented at a bird's tongue, those are more stubby-horn-like than flat.
For the tail, instead of using dithering, I'd go for the shinyness you applied to the legs. You should also keep in mind that the object should be shaded as one, and not each little segment by itself. The lower part should probably be even darker than in my edit.
Original - colour adjust - some changes to some pixel clusters.
I'd increase the contrast. Maybe do a little more hue-shifting, too (dark red over to purple and such fancy things). I also reduced the colour count in my edit.
Concerning the tongue, I think it's mostly the shape that looks off and having the highlight rather centered seems odd to me, too - mine is more oriented at a bird's tongue, those are more stubby-horn-like than flat.
For the tail, instead of using dithering, I'd go for the shinyness you applied to the legs. You should also keep in mind that the object should be shaded as one, and not each little segment by itself. The lower part should probably be even darker than in my edit.